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Sykerö kirjoitti:kaveri voisi itse ilmottautua käytöstapojen tai rakentavan kritiikin ABC kurssille. How rude!

AgeofSignar116 kirjoitti:

Sykerö kirjoitti:kaveri voisi itse ilmottautua käytöstapojen tai rakentavan kritiikin ABC kurssille. How rude!

Rehellinen palaute rakentaa.
Mikäli kismittää, tule toki osoittamaan kaikki virheet miun sutimisisssa. Olen jopa iloinen jos niin teet, koska kukaan ei voi parantaa toimiaan jos niistä ei huomauteta. Ruusuille siloiteltu positiivinen palaute silloin kun jälki on kuin 6-vuotiaan talomaalilla maalaamaa ei voi tehdä muuta kuin pahentaa tilannetta.

AgeofSignar116 kirjoitti:

Sykerö kirjoitti:kaveri voisi itse ilmottautua käytöstapojen tai rakentavan kritiikin ABC kurssille. How rude!

Rehellinen palaute rakentaa.

stanfar kirjoitti:

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stanfar kirjoitti:

ookkeri kirjoitti:I'm not trying to be a dick but I'd like to point out the following things:

stanfar kirjoitti:

Aspiring Champion's chainmail is the first thing we need to discuss about. On a piece, where the detail is "small" it can easily be seen, whether one applies too thick of a coat or not. On both edges, the holes are starting to "disappear" due to the paint being too thick on those parts. After your black undercoat, you could either paint multiple layers from some really dark metal to mithril silvir as it is hard to cover black undercoat. Or you could paint some brown over the black and after that paint the metal. Anyway, few thin layers > one thick layer. After you have a good coverage, apply shades / washes gently as you don't want it to pool on certain areas.

Its the use of wash that ruined it sadly. My honest mistake by putting little bit too much... Sigh... But I will try that upon the next squad.

stanfar kirjoitti:

Those bases indeed look like rushed. The gravel you use is really big, if it represents sand etc, it is too rough. Also some of the rocks are on the sides and not all the sides are painted properly (one on the right and aspiring champion.

Notice the guy with red hair coming from his helmet? There you have applied too much wash, probably you didn't shake the bottle at all (resulting sometimes in glossy outcome with badab black and few other paints). Even with washes it is better to have multiple layers and black isn't the best wash for red.

After watching the picture multiple times it left me pondering if you had glued the rocks to bases before you glued the models on bases

I put them on after. About the red hair guy there is multiple layers of wash and maybe black wash isn't the best option, but then again the wash haven't dried up in these pictures. Those bases are really rushed up and I admit that since I honestly hate doing basing and I'm really
bad at it, since I have no real inspiration to get better at it... so sorry about that. :/ And those bases were simply spray painted because my simple "lazyness" about it so that should some up why those bases aren't really that great or amazing as I didn't put more effort to them.

stanfar kirjoitti:

Gold is really flat. You need to shade it as well as now it looks like you just rushed these.

Silver / Iron parts are messy and too thick, same things apply here as in the comments on the chainmail on champion.

Does the Icon Bearer use lipstick often or is it blood or just a brush wandering off?

stanfar kirjoitti: Actually that is the tongue,which stick out from the helmet so none of those?

AgeofSignar116 kirjoitti:

stanfar kirjoitti: Actually that is the tongue,which stick out from the helmet so none of those?

All of my wat.