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Archmage Edanen Skyfall

Edanen is strong mage who studies Lore of Heavens.
When he was young, his parents were killed in Dark Elf raid.
He went to Tower of Hoeth and he was accepted to study there.
His powers grew stronger than many other mage,
and now he is one of the strongest mages in world.
He took part in Storm of Chaos,
where he met Teclis and they became friends.



Pendant of Edanen (Jewel of the Dusk)
''This pendant was gifted to Edanen by no more than Teclis himself.
It help's it's bearer in controlling the Winds of Magic.''

Crown of the High Mage (Ring of Corin)
''This crown was given to Edanen when he became Archmage.
It has great power to drain magic from items nearby.''

Gem of Winter (Dispel Scroll)
''Edanen found Gem of Winter from an old keep of Dwarfs.
Gem was made to help against magic, and help it will.''

Soul of Eagle (Seer)
''Edanen have been practising Lore of Heavens for many Centuries.
He knows how to control Wind of Azyr better than anybody other,
apart from Teclis.''


Mage Alnaur Embersling

Alnaur is from one of the whealties families in all Ulthuan.
When he was young his father felt that Alnaur had skill in sorcery.
He sent Alnaur to study magic and sorcery to the White Tower.
Alnaur started to study High Magic, and soon, he was complete as mage.
After some years, Alnaur took part in Storm of Chaos.
In there, he and Edanen became friends.


Sword of Wisdom (Silver Wand)
''Sword of Wisdom is ancient artifact that was his father's.
it's Alnaur's greatest treasure, and he have used it in many battles.''

Strong Mind (Seer)
''If Alnaur focuses, he can greatly change course of the Winds of Magic.
That is why he is respected and feared mage.''

Power of Ancestors (Channeller)
''Alnaur is form noble family, and there are just few more greater families.
Alnaurs Ancestors will help him in need.''

Helper of Many (Pure of Heart)
''Alnaur have helped many other elves by giving them what they needed.
He is loved among elves and there are just few who cloud flee in front of him.''


Mage Nanoraas Srongroot

Nanoraas is originally Wood Elf Mage who left to Ulthuan from Athel Loren.
After long journey he arrived to Ulthuan.
There he studied art of magic,
and in no time he was one of the most respected mages in all Ulthuan.
He had skill especially in Lore of Life,
Although he new other Lores too.
After Storm of Chaos he got friend from Edanen Skyfall.


Magical Leaves (Power Stone)
''Nanoraas carries leaves that boost strongly his spellcasting ability.
Nanoraas got leaves from Athel Loren before he left.''


Friend of Nature (Seer)
''Nanoraas is orginally Wood Elf and he has ability to
understand Wind of Ghyran better than many other.
Controlling nature is no challenge to him.''


Mage Anarhin Baneshadow

Anarhin grew in Shadowlands and raids of Dark Elves corrupted his mind.
He became quick tempered and full of hate. After many years of suffering,
he went to White Tower of Hoeth for advice to get rid of the horrors that plagued
hi's mind. In there mages felt that he had talent in sorcery.
He became to practise the art of sorcery and got rid of his horrors.
Now he is both great and feared shadow mage.
He also gained ability to control his hate so it won’t matter anymore.


Staff of Hoeth (Ring of Fury)
''Anahir got Staff of Hoeth after he became a Mage.
Staff holds dangerous power of Khaine's Fury.''

Sigil of Protection (Dispel scroll)
''Sigil of Protection is old treasure of High Elves.
It's craved whit markings to protect from harmful magic.''

ööh, no offense mutta lähes kaikki oli "He left to White Tower to study because he was talented" jne.

Pesonen kirjoitti:ööh, no offense mutta lähes kaikki oli "He left to White Tower to study because he was talented" jne.

juu. en oikein keksinyt muutakaan. Mites ne sitte pääsis opiskelemaan?

Muokkasin Nanoraasin fluffia että ei olisi niin toistoa.

En kommentoi itse taustaa koska luin sen vain päällisesti mutta kielioppia voisit kyllä parantaa. Ei nyt millään pahalla mutta kun nuo lauseet heitteli niin (välillä paljon ja välillä vähemmän). Lueskele jotain ja yritä repiä inpspistä noihin, onhan se varmaan tietysti vaikeaa keksiä erilaista kun kaikki charrut on maageja Jatka vaan, kielioppia kun vielä parannat niin kyllä se rupeaa siitä sujumaan.

High king Godric kirjoitti:En kommentoi itse taustaa koska luin sen vain päällisesti mutta kielioppia voisit kyllä parantaa. Ei nyt millään pahalla mutta kun nuo lauseet heitteli niin (välillä paljon ja välillä vähemmän). Lueskele jotain ja yritä repiä inpspistä noihin, onhan se varmaan tietysti vaikeaa keksiä erilaista kun kaikki charrut on maageja Jatka vaan, kielioppia kun vielä parannat niin kyllä se rupeaa siitä sujumaan.

Sano esimerkki. Itse en huomannut mitään parannettavaa kieliopissa. Kohta tulee armeiankin fluffi.

Pjoo kirjoitti:Sano esimerkki. Itse en huomannut mitään parannettavaa kieliopissa. Kohta tulee armeiankin fluffi.

''Sword of Wisdom is ancient artefact that belong to his father.
it's Alnaur's greatest treasure, and he have used it in many battles.''

Lisäksi, se on "armeijankin".

Attila kirjoitti:

Pjoo kirjoitti:Sano esimerkki. Itse en huomannut mitään parannettavaa kieliopissa. Kohta tulee armeiankin fluffi.

''Sword of Wisdom is ancient artefact that was his father's.
it's Alnaur's greatest treasure, and he have used it in many battles.''

Lisäksi, se on "armeijankin".

miten niin se on armeiankin? en tajunnut. Muokkasin sitä vähän.

Vaikka lausuttaessa se kuulostaisi i:ltä, on se j-kirjain.

25 euroa riittää näin pienestä hommasta...

Thelacan kirjoitti:Vaikka lausuttaessa se kuulostaisi i:ltä, on se j-kirjain.

25 euroa riittää näin pienestä hommasta...

Jaa nyt tajusin.

Hehheh..... Tarkistin tuon Wordin oikeinkirjoitusohjelmalla ja virheitähän löytyi. Editoin tuon topickin tekstin.