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The Cronicles of Angels of Sorrow: Part I

Lähetetty: Ti 18.10.2005 13:16
Kirjoittaja Arachinid
The sound of bolter fire filled the air with sounds of war as I charged up the hill to face my enemy. I drew my two perfectly made black powerswors as I rushed against the enemy lines, my brothers falling beside me. We had been anbushed by Ultramarine patrol nearby and now my whole legion was falling apart. Bolter round penetrated my shoulder plate and carved into my flesh, dealing a great amount of pain. Still I rushed forward until me and my squad finaly got our weapons on ouir enemies. Chainswords clansed angaist eachother and other ones power armour, sending an rending noise in the air. They had more men, but we fought better, though we had been trained exspecialy for close combat fighting. We rip their armours and broke therir line, but they would not give up. We slaughterd them to last man and then we called for aid to secure a landing zone for drop pods. I raised the beacon and stiked it into the ground on top of the hill, to mark the landing zone for backup.

Soon a dozen of drop pods apeared from the sky, falling around the hill. Chaos space marines rushed out of the pods to face the enemy, firing their bolters constantly. Then anohter two pods fell into the ground, and opened. Two Dreadnaughts walked out sending a beastial roar over the battlefield. Those Dreadnaughts were controlled by two brothers named Damecus and Mephistos. Damecus, armed with an twin-linked lascannon and a Heavy Flamer, aimed and released a salvo of lascannon fire down the hill at the enemy Predator. Predator armor melted from the heat of the blast, and the whole thing exploded, sendin nearby Ultramarines stumbling to ground. Mephistos Rushed forward firing it's two twin-linked boltters, until i got into close combat with the enemy. With it's two huge claws, it riped enemy marines apart and threw them against their own ranks. I isued a charge down the hill and my breathen accepted with a great howl of anger and bloodlust. We rushed down the hill and jumped at our suprised enemy, striking with great vengeance. I fought, seeing my brothers falling beside me. But the enemy fell too. Then suddenly, Damecus and Mephistos started slughtering everything around them, friend and foe. They picked up helpless brothers, ripping and rending them apart with great arks of blood. Ultramarine force regrouped and assaulted at our back soon after the Dreadnaughts had gone mad in their frenzy. We fought back, but enemy pushed to hard upon us. I isued an order to retreat and we fought our way from combat.

When we ran down the hill back at the city we had taken over couple weeks ago, Dreadnaughts gained their grip on themselves and started firing and slaying ultramarines around them, leaving us alone. We took a defencive position in closest buildings and started to fire at their lines. We had used all our backup exept for few daemons and our sorcerer had not used his powers yet. I and him gave eachother a stare and then the sorcerer started using his powers. Three bolts of purple light came out of his hand and flew towards the enemy, creating a crackling expolsion when hitting their target.

The enemy was almost defeated and our troops rallied to final charge. We ran up the hil constantly laying fire on their weakening lines, and when we got to them, we slaughtered them with our chainswords. Finaly the last ones of their line were put down by our troops, and w eregrouped to report the amount of casulties. Dreadnoughts were chained and guarded untill transport ariwed to take it to our ship. I, Brother Lieutenant Zaracus, had taken the planet under the command of Commander Dalemacus, the leader of the Angels of Sorrow, and so shall it remain as long as i breath this blood and hate filled air.

Lähetetty: Ti 18.10.2005 18:38
Kirjoittaja Lihamestari
Oli vaikea löytää tarina kirjoitus- ja kielioppivirheiden seasta.

Lähetetty: Ti 18.10.2005 19:14
Kirjoittaja WolfMan
Mainiota! Harvemmin pääsee lukemaan kaaosmarinen silmistä kuvattua tarinaa, ja vielä englanniksi :P Propsis siitä.

Lähetetty: Ti 18.10.2005 20:20
Kirjoittaja Arachinid
pyydän anteeksi virheitä luin tekstin 2 kertaa virheiden takia muta minulla saattaa olla lukihäiriö :D:D :P ja kielioppivirheitä pahoittelen myös :D....
tämä on tulevaa fluffia tulevalle Chaos Space Marine armeijalle.. oma chapter tai legioona tai mikälie ...... :D:D

Lähetetty: Ti 18.10.2005 20:48
Kirjoittaja Lihamestari
Arachind kirjoitti: dealing a great amount of paint
Aiheutti suuren määrän maalia?

Tuossa yksi monista.

Lähetetty: Su 23.10.2005 15:20
Kirjoittaja Arachinid
noniin virheet korjattu (toivottavast).... siitä sitten kommentii tuleen :P

Lähetetty: Ma 24.10.2005 03:15
Kirjoittaja Arachinid
update :D:D