(40k) The planet. (tuskin sopiva otsikko)
Lähetetty: Pe 17.02.2006 17:36
joo elikkäs eka englannin kielinen tarinani (itseasiassa ensimmäinen millään kielellä). sekä positiivista että negatiivista palautetta otetaan vastaan.
Part 1:
A gasbarrel blowed up right behind captain Colonel. Colonel was saved thanks to his power armour but the danger wasn’t over. There were more than a thousand orks running and shouting WAAGH! “This is not good” Colonel said to a space marine who was carrying a flag.”i know sir” warrior answered. “ We have only a couple of men protecting this city” “But where is the starship of the Calgar?” Colonel asked. “they are coming.” warrior asid and at the same time a bullet penetrates his armor. “Shit” Colonel muttered. The ork were conquested over a half of the city and only a few marines were still standing.Colonel started to be worry about their future but suddenly someone or something shooted orkswith something strange weapon.
“What the ****” Colonel astonished. Something came behind a big city wall. It was a Tau hammerhead. “Thanks a lot” Colonel shouted. “We are saved” “i think you guys have a little problem with those orks” someone shouted inside of hammerhead. “You got it” Colonel answered. And after that more than three hundred of Tau fire warriors came and orks realized that they have no change anymore. They tried to escape but the good guys killed almost all of them. Only one squad of orks were able to escape, but the bad thing was that the big bad ork boss, grazhgutz was in that squad. After battle Colonel and Taus leader, Shas’la Talked to each other. “We are very grateful for your help today commander Shas’la” Colonel said. “We just served the greater good” Shas’la said. “And now we have to go” he added. Shas’la was already walking away but Colonel Shouted: “Wait, can i ask you something?” “Sure” Shas’la answered. “How you knew we were here?”. “it’s a secred” Shas’la only said and after that he went to his hammerhead and flew away.
Colonel gather up his troops and he said a few words. “The Emperor was with us today. But more than Emperor we should thanks Taus and Shas’la because without them we all would be dead right now.” Space marines cheer to Colonel and they all made a big combat training because if those orks came back they would be able to kill them all. Only colonel wasn’t practicing. He was trying to connect with starship. Finally he made it and he was happy when he heard the voice of Marenus Calgar. “Hello Colonel! I presume that the orks are defeated. “Marenus said. “All except one squad and the bifg boss” Colonel said. “Tau helped us” He added. “That is good. Anyway were are comng soon. Only five more minutes. Then we will destroy that ork boss” Marenus said and ended call. Colonel was very happy. And after five the starship landed near of Colonel. There was fifty space marines inside of it. The starship was glorious. It was bigger than a hotel and there were cannons everywhere. It was clear that the starship weren’t easy to destroy. “Where do you think that ork boss is?” Marenus asked for Colonel. “I think the only place there could be orks is the ruined city. It’s not far away”. At the same time a scout came and said: “We have detected the orks. They are running foward to a ruined city”. “We’ll let them to go to their positions and then we’ll crush them” Marenus said. “But there is something more” Scout keep on talking. “What, What is it?” Marenus asked. “We have also detected chaos space marines. We think that they are going to help orks” Scout said and left. “Well we have to try anyway. The only ship of ours is far away” Marenus said to Colonus.
Part 1:
A gasbarrel blowed up right behind captain Colonel. Colonel was saved thanks to his power armour but the danger wasn’t over. There were more than a thousand orks running and shouting WAAGH! “This is not good” Colonel said to a space marine who was carrying a flag.”i know sir” warrior answered. “ We have only a couple of men protecting this city” “But where is the starship of the Calgar?” Colonel asked. “they are coming.” warrior asid and at the same time a bullet penetrates his armor. “Shit” Colonel muttered. The ork were conquested over a half of the city and only a few marines were still standing.Colonel started to be worry about their future but suddenly someone or something shooted orkswith something strange weapon.
“What the ****” Colonel astonished. Something came behind a big city wall. It was a Tau hammerhead. “Thanks a lot” Colonel shouted. “We are saved” “i think you guys have a little problem with those orks” someone shouted inside of hammerhead. “You got it” Colonel answered. And after that more than three hundred of Tau fire warriors came and orks realized that they have no change anymore. They tried to escape but the good guys killed almost all of them. Only one squad of orks were able to escape, but the bad thing was that the big bad ork boss, grazhgutz was in that squad. After battle Colonel and Taus leader, Shas’la Talked to each other. “We are very grateful for your help today commander Shas’la” Colonel said. “We just served the greater good” Shas’la said. “And now we have to go” he added. Shas’la was already walking away but Colonel Shouted: “Wait, can i ask you something?” “Sure” Shas’la answered. “How you knew we were here?”. “it’s a secred” Shas’la only said and after that he went to his hammerhead and flew away.
Colonel gather up his troops and he said a few words. “The Emperor was with us today. But more than Emperor we should thanks Taus and Shas’la because without them we all would be dead right now.” Space marines cheer to Colonel and they all made a big combat training because if those orks came back they would be able to kill them all. Only colonel wasn’t practicing. He was trying to connect with starship. Finally he made it and he was happy when he heard the voice of Marenus Calgar. “Hello Colonel! I presume that the orks are defeated. “Marenus said. “All except one squad and the bifg boss” Colonel said. “Tau helped us” He added. “That is good. Anyway were are comng soon. Only five more minutes. Then we will destroy that ork boss” Marenus said and ended call. Colonel was very happy. And after five the starship landed near of Colonel. There was fifty space marines inside of it. The starship was glorious. It was bigger than a hotel and there were cannons everywhere. It was clear that the starship weren’t easy to destroy. “Where do you think that ork boss is?” Marenus asked for Colonel. “I think the only place there could be orks is the ruined city. It’s not far away”. At the same time a scout came and said: “We have detected the orks. They are running foward to a ruined city”. “We’ll let them to go to their positions and then we’ll crush them” Marenus said. “But there is something more” Scout keep on talking. “What, What is it?” Marenus asked. “We have also detected chaos space marines. We think that they are going to help orks” Scout said and left. “Well we have to try anyway. The only ship of ours is far away” Marenus said to Colonus.