Oman Marine Chapterin pörröä (muokattu)

[GreenOwl2]

Organization

Silver Confessors organization is unique, they organized 100 Division which lead by Captain-Commanders who answer only Primarch of Silver Conferssors, each division has
2 Century lead by Liutenant Commander, each century has 5 companies lead by Captain, each company has 10 platoons lead by Liutenant, and each platoon has 10 squad lead by Sergeant. Silver Confessors also Kwon another name that is Ordo Imperialis, whicts is mysterious organization who had authorization over any one in Imperium exept Emperor himself, they can declare any one or any organization to heretics even highlords of terra, but no really kwons who they are, some times mysterious inquistors, Space Marines or imperial guard generals had Mandate to do something, and mandate is sight by Daughter of Emperor leader of Ordo Imperialis and High Extreme Inquistor Lady of The Imperium.

History




During Battle Of Isstvan III Emperor beginning secrect project making second generation Primarch and Space Marines something go badly wrong only one Primarch success, other simply don’t wake up on their breeding chambers this Primarch was Maria all so kwon of Daughter of Emperor. Emperor thinks what he do with her then make space marine Legion, from her geneseed. But shortly after their creation their vanish from kwon space. What was realy happened Emperor send them to secrect location to gather their Strenght and build their organization.


Back to imperial records:
152.M32 is first time seen them again, when one 3000 Silver armoured Space Marines lead by Inquistor of Ordo Imperialis came to Kwon Space and Inquisitor declared Planet Ocubus Govenor to Heretic they over throught the Planet administratum and inform High Lords of Terra Planet need new Govenor. After This these mysterious forces has been seen many times, they come use their unique mandate to what they need to and then they disappear.

Battle of Emezuz

Imperial Guard Regiment Cadia 897th was send to Emezuz to help pdf restore order, but then nature of rebellion revealed there is full scale of chaos invasion. Commander of Cadia 897th send urgent call from help to Imperium, Answer come unexpected source. General Bruots get message following message to back: “This Maria Primarch of f Silver Confessor, I Send General Graol with 4 companies and 80 regiments to help you, they will contact you when they arrived.” 16 hours after this Cadia 897th headquarters in planet capical contacted by Genaral Graol who told he coming down with his troops, General Bruots ask how many troops he had. Graol Anwers as 4 companies of Space Marines and my own 80 regiments of Imperial army . Then he said be ready and next what seen thosands of drop pods landing on city and surrouned are capital sqruare landed hundreds of Thuderhawks and dropships. Then General and his captains landind with thunderhawk direcly front of Headquaters. General march to command center and ask what is situation. General Bruots and planery commander are confused general is asking situation and there four marine captains behind him who not say anything, but Bruotos told situation and the his very confused general turn around and beginning give command to captains they are blindly obay, and the his give same command with vox to own troops.
Bruotos ask how you can command space marines, Graol smiled and said because Primarch put me charge of this mission.
After two days rebellion was defeated.

Then arrived Inquistion led by Ordo Hereticus Inquisitor Domak. He thanks space marine captain who had most purity seals. but Captain said sorry Sir but I’m not charge of this mission, please talk to general.

Domak is confused and asked when space marines had generals, Captain said never sir, but I mean General Graol of Imperial army and pointing Graol. Inquistor ask Graol are you in command, Graol answer yes, Inquistor gave order gave me full report. Graol said to inquisitor Sorry sir, but don’t take orders from you, my order come directly from The Primarch, I all ready send my report to her, if she want send it to inquisition it’s her business not mine.
Domak: What are talking about PRIMARCH? There is no Primarchs any more.
Graol: Perhaps you can told her when she arrived
Domak: What?
Graol: She send me message ” I’ll coming there and put that damm Inquistor in Line!”

Domak: Interesting, then I Think I’ll wait her

2 days after

Headquaters contacted by ship

Headquaters of Emezuz This is Captain-Commander Marcus Agramos of Silver Confessors Honour Guard. Light of Emperor request for landing, we have Primarch her self on board.

Graol take microphone and said welcome Captain-Commander Marcus, you can land on airport and come there with thunderhawk.
Marcus: Thak you General.

2 Hours later in Meeting room

Inquistor sitting with general and his staff in meenting room and waiting.

then doors are open and ten silver and gold armored space marine coming and after then most beautiful women inquisitor had ever seen, she dressed some kind of custom made power armour and massive Sword and Bolter. You must be Primarc Maria Inquistor Domak said.

Maria: Yes Inquistor, I am Primarch Maria.
Domak: I’ll heard all primarch are gone and never hear from primarch Maria.
Maria: Yes I Kwon, I’ll heard all records from me and my Brother Hood was removed from imperial records after we disappear 11 thousand years ago, but we are back and fight for Father Emperor once more.
Domak: ok. Where you been?
Maria: In our Secret home Planet, named Chaepullu and it near sectors what we explored and recover interesting things.
Domak: Where is this Chaepullu?
Maria: it’s coordinates is 27896596599kohh
Domak: That isn’t warp coordinates
Maria: yes I Kwon that, but you can’t go there with warp coordinates.
Domak: why?
Maria: I Don’t kwon, we tried that 8000 years ago but we found as in Ophelia.
Domak: Strange?
Maria: Yes.
Domak: So, how you go there.
Maria: we using alternative driving technology, what we found from Chaepullu.
Domak: Sounds like heresy to me
Maria: that’s not my Promblem, you have no authority to declare me or my Brother Hood to heretics, because I Answer only to Father Emperor.
Domak: You ARE HERETICS, and think I need send this message to any one in imperium.
Maria smiled and said: please go head, I think other space marines chapter like so much of that, I know if Space wolves, Blood Angels and Dark Angels aren’t First Founding Legion they are heretics. Only reason they why aren’t declared to heretics are they are fist founding legions, and My Brother hood also founded by Father Emperor as first founding, that means only Emperor can declared as to heretics.

Domak: but, you different you can’t show you really are founded by Emperor.
Maria: Aren’t we?, you kwon inquisitor there is secret recors in Imperial Palace where Father Emperors stored that kwoledge.
Domak: Why I haven’t heard of that secret records?
Maria: Because it is open only to Father Emperor himself and to me Daughter of Emperor and one Primarch , but I heard he was betray our Father and killed by him.
Domak: Then so me that record and who is that Primarch you talking about.
Maria: Sorry Inquistor Domak, I can’t do that, only Father Emperor can give you access to it, and so I have heard that is impossible on this circumtances, and that means you must trust me, and Primarch was of course Warmaster Horus the Lupercal.
Domak: How dare, I am Inquistor of Ordo Hereticus!
Maria: Beware what you said Inquistor, I kwon my rights so well, as Daughter of Emperor, I have authority to declare you and you organization to Heretics.
Domak: I have never hear of that kind authority outside of inquisition.
Maria: That is right Inquistor Domak, there is not that kind of authority outside of Inquistion, but so Silver Confessor are part of Inquistion, in their own way.
Domak: What?
Maria: You must have heard of us, by different name offcourse .
Domak: And what is that name?
Maria: Ordo Imperialis!
Domak: yes I have heard form Ordo Imperialis, they are agents of Holy Emperor himself, who monitor inquisition, no one kwons who they are.
Maria: So now you Kwon that Domak, that means you aren’t part of ordo hereticus anymore.
Domak: What you mean?
Maria: I mean you now part of Ordo Imperialis and you come with us.
Domak: I Can’t must report this to my superiors.
Maria: Legion Council is your superior now, Come inquisitor we take you to caepullu and if you did not come peacefully we use force if we must.
Domak: ok, I’ll come.

Then Silver Confessor back in there ships and gone.

After this they had seen sometimes, several places helping Imperium to victory or do some other things like recovery some strange anchient arfact or using there unique mandate to over through planetary command, they come and then disappear.
And what happeds to Inquistor Domak?
His now Inquistor Lord Domak of Ordo Imperialis, who as answers only to Silver Confessors Legion council and trough that To Father Emperor.

[Half-breed]

Minusta ei ole oikein fiksua tehdä pörröä kahdelle kadonneelle legioonalle. Ne ovat kuitenkin sellaisia juttuja, jotka soisi pysyvän piilossa, ja tuovan tuntemattomuutta peliin. Salaisuuden paljastaminen on vähän meh, eikä mikään legioona voi oikein korvata sitä salaperäisyyttä mikä liittyy noihin kadonneisiin legiooniin. Suosittelen vain potkimaan koko homman aikaisemmaksi, niin että kyseessä on jokin geneerinen kadonnut Chapteri, eikä yksi alkuperäisistä legioonista.

[GreenOwl2]

muokattu

[Half-breed]

Edellinen kommenttini on edelleen validi, mutta onko tää nyt vakavasti kirjoitettua, vai puhdasta läppää? Tekstin asu on vain niin hirvittävää, ettei tuota uskoisi 28-vuotiaan kirjoittamaksi. Itseasiassa tekstissä on sen verta kieli poskella juttuja, että tän on kyllä ihan pakko olla trollausta.

[Moogel]

Minä näen tässä yksinäisen känni-illan hengentuotoksia, se ainakin selittäisi

Graol take microphone and said welcome Captain-Commander Marcus, you can land on airport and come there with thunderhawk.

tämänlaiset lauseet. Tai sitten tajunta on virrannut niin vuolaasti ettei kielioppi ole pysynyt perässä.

Jokatapauksessa, ei näin :(

[sanita jim]

Minä näen tässä yksinäisen känni-illan hengentuotoksia, se ainakin selittäisi

Graol take microphone and said welcome Captain-Commander Marcus, you can land on airport and come there with thunderhawk.

tämänlaiset lauseet. Tai sitten tajunta on virrannut niin vuolaasti ettei kielioppi ole pysynyt perässä.

Jokatapauksessa, ei näin :(

Minä näen tässä yksinäisen känni-illan hengentuotoksia, se ainakin selittäisi

[santso]

Kirjoittakaa suomeksi! Ei se pörrö sen paremmalta tunnu vaikka sen tönkkö-englannilla laittais.

[Seraphi]

Antakaa mielikuvitukselle tilaa edes muille, jos fanaattisimmilta ei sitä löydy.

Vaikka itsekin bongasin muutaman kirjoitus virheen, niin silti itse tykkään omanlaisista ideoista ja fani-fiktioista. Idealle kyll annan pisteet. Miinusta repliikkeihin joissa ovat kirjaimet "o" ja "k" peräkkäin. Pieniä juttuja, joista ei kannata vetää herneenpalkoja nieluun asti.
Anyway olisi kivaa jos GreenOwl jaksaa kirjoittaa lisää.