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Purging of Frelian 8 osa I

Onko kynä (tai näppäimistö) miekkaa mahtavampi? Tule ja todista, että näin on - muuten emme usko.
neo
Viestit: 251
Liittynyt: Pe 18.04.2003 01:01

Purging of Frelian 8 osa I

Viesti Kirjoittaja neo »

Tässä ois jotain grey knight kamaa niille jotka sitä haluaa. Huom. Kirjotan tän yheltä istumalta joten virheitä tulee olemaan.

As he stepped in to the centre of the teleporting device onboard "the Emperor's Justice" he though for the times when fellow grand masters and even brother-captains of grey knights had been judging for his promotion. Straight from an ordinary grey knight to a grey knight grand master. But the weirdest thing was that none knew from who had given the command to promote him. The wildest rumors talked that it could had been the Emperor although none had witnessed Him doing anything in such a small scale. Many had said that it was too soon but he knew that all he had seen in the dream 16 years ago was going to come true. Only he with a stroke of a hand against the hazardously poisonous dirt of Frelian 8 could turn the dead world once again to a fertile world.

But now was not a time to think things like that. He was going to an assignement to Frelian 8, he cleared his mind from the dream, and started to read his own version of canticle of absolution.
"With the Nemesis I shall fight
and strike without a warning I will
no temptation will weaken my resolve
no witchcraft will bring my doom
for I am the sword of justice
and my courage comes from the emperor
who shall see me victourous
ET IMPERATOR INVOCATO DIABOLUS DEAMONICA EXORCISM!"

Just after he had finished the last sentence he opened his eyes and noticed that all the other grey knights were holding their storm bolter hands against their chest plates. So all the others were ready. Well so was he and he raised his left hand to touch his chest plate. In the same second he and his squad of 9 of the emperor's finest warriors clad in the best equipment the galaxy had to offer were teleported to soil of Frelian 8

After few seconds of dizzines he found something to focus on the planets surface. It was about meter and a half tall and it seemed to shiver in the near 70 degrees cold wind. In the same second he remembered that Brother-Captain Trien was about to teleport to the surface so he commanded his squad out of the clearing and setted the homer in the middle. As he returned to his squad he remembered the shivering figure once again. So he glanced to his left on the rock the figure had been ten seconds ago...
Andromedus
Viestit: 1968
Liittynyt: Su 06.10.2002 19:57
Paikkakunta: Savonlinna, Itäisten arojen linnake

Viesti Kirjoittaja Andromedus »

Jatkoa vaan, aika mielenkiintoinen tarina. Odotan innolla seuraavaa osaa. En hirveesti virheitä huomanut kyllä.
On se kumma että sain potkut työstäni vaikken mitään tehnyt.
neo
Viestit: 251
Liittynyt: Pe 18.04.2003 01:01

Viesti Kirjoittaja neo »

Kiitti Andromedus. Inspiraatio tuli kyllä osaks sulta (luin pari tarinaas)
Andromedus
Viestit: 1968
Liittynyt: Su 06.10.2002 19:57
Paikkakunta: Savonlinna, Itäisten arojen linnake

Viesti Kirjoittaja Andromedus »

Aijaa, no mukava jos joku inspiroituu noista mun tarinoista. Odotan seuraavaa osaa ihan mielekiinnolla.
On se kumma että sain potkut työstäni vaikken mitään tehnyt.
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