Protectors of the Grail.

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:: Intro ::
Juu eli tarinan graali ei ole graali jota on bretonnian tarinoissa ja tarina on TÄYNNÄ virheitä mutta teinpä tän vain hetken johtopäätöksestä kun keksin omalle armeijalleni historiaa (inspiraatio tuli indiana jones the last crusade elokuvasta)
Ok here how it goes...

Long ago there was a priest who fought for only to protect the innocent from invading nomads and the wast armies of orcs.. This man was called Khetep Incub the priest from city of Mor. He surely had no problems of slaughtering those who invaded the southern lands and the city of Mor near ash river.. but inside this man was truely a good soul who tried to keep the peace in the land but then it came.. something that even this priest could not stop - Nagash the great lord of undead.. Khetep knew that he would be preparing for hes last battle.. he had hes last meal and waited... One night a wave of chill came trough the city and Khetep prepared hes army to the last desperate battle. So it came darkness only darkness in the horizon and great lines of living dead... the battle was short but Khetep fought bravely to the end.. Nagash had ordered the necromancers to torture all the priests that would try to stop hes army till they die.. So the lord Balag who led the army that raized Mor crucified Khetep on his own cross located in the temple of Mor and drained all the blood to this wooden cup but Balag didnt know that while in the cross Khetep prepared hes last prayer to the gods.. the temple started crumble and great earthquake followed.. the last ruins of the city and the temple collapsed... no one survived to tell the story of Mor but rumours tell about this Liche that commands an army near the ash river and protecting the holy grail.. eternal life....

to be continued..

Semmonen satu tällä kertaa seuraavan tarun koitan korjata virheistä jne. se tulee kertomaan Khetepin nuoruuden Nehekharahissa..

[High king Godric]

Hieno tarina, ehkä voisit vähän kuvailla lisää. Idea oli uusi hyvä. Kirjoitusvihreitä tosiaan oli se ei haittaa jos tarkastat seuraavan osan. Keep up the good work!

[Jos]

Ihan ok stoori, mutta on pakko sanoa yksi virhe, joka häiritsi aika pahasti. Nimittäin yksikön kolmannen persoonan genetiivi miehelle ei ole "hes" vaan his.