Erään delf listani fluffi

[Mekol]

Tuli yhtäkkiä hirviä hinku kirjottaa jotain. Noh tämä ajatus on jo kauan pyörinyt päässä. Toivottavasti virheet eivät haittaa, pyrin kyllä välttämään niitä jos suinkin mahdollista. Tällaisella listalla olen pelannut vain kerran, voitin listalla Empiren solidilla, vastustajani halusi ilman magiaa ja sehän sopi.

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Lord Mekol Andremor
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-shield
-Heart stone of darkness
-Draich of darkpower
-SDC

Mekol was one of many childrens of the Andremors family. Like his father he was going to be soldier. He trained hardly and when he was old enough he was accepted to the school of Executioners. There he trained hardly than he ever had and finaly, after many battles he finally got promotion to be a Noble. Bravely he slaided all enemies who tried to kill his master Aflar Andremor. Aflar was his father and dearest of all his friends. But when his father died he was promoter again. Now he is leader of Adremors family and he rides to battle with his fathers dragon Seperho's, this dragon was a gift form Malekith himself to his father Aflar and now it belong's to Mekol

Mirta Andremor
-Ha
-enhanced shield
-Sword of might
-SCD

Mekol had a little time to love. He got two children, Mirta and Alrik. Like her morher Zazinz's she got trained with sword and shield, unlikely other girls of her age she did't intrested of magic Sword and shield has always been her best friends. Like all elves Mirta is also very beatiful, many elf men's have tried to her, but always Mirta says " no, i don't love you, my love belongs to my shield and sword". Mekol hopes that Mirta will someday leave all thease war things behind and start's enjoying her life. But Mekol dosen't know one thing on her daughter. Mirta is so loved to slaughter and war that she has forgottet normal love and passion.

Alrik Andremor
-cold one
-Ha
-SDC
-Hydra banner

Alrik was Mekol's second and the last children. He wanted that his son is going to be a great warrior like him self. When Alrik was in a age of twenty he sended him to school to train skills of war. After ten years Alrik returned and now he is carries his fathers own banner. Alrik rides to battle with deadly beast called cold ones, he rides withing his fathers loyal knight's. His banner is so beautiful and gorgeus thaht knights will hit more hardly and faster than they ever had. Mekol is also skillful with sword. But he is more likely know as a good lieutenant not as a good fighter.

Troops

Spermens

20 (full com)
20 (full com)

When is time to fight, they will do their job. When is time to defend people, they will do their job. When is time to slay their most hatred enemies High elves they will do their job. And they will do it well

Dark riders

5 Dark rideria

They will charge to flank of out enemies, they patroll our land, they hunt down our enemies with their speed and spear. They are also know with their skill with our repeating crossbow. They are Dark riders and they will do their job, like lord Mekol want's

Crossbowmens

10xCrowbowmen
10xCrowbowmen

with skills of shooting dark elf repeating crossbowmens are feared all around the world. Many times they have turned the way of the battle. Mekol respects them like he respected his father. They one of Mekol's army deadlies troops

Shades

5xshade

they are deadlyes of all shooter of dark elf army, because they can sneak behind the enemy lines and kill important members or our enemies, that's why they live in great respect in Mekol's heart.

Cold One Knight's

6x Cold one knight's (full com, banner of soul and shadows)

They are the most deadlies combat unit's of Mekol's army. They will smash enemies shield and kill them with their deadly lance. They ride to battle with beasts called Cold Ones, they are more deadfull than normal horses and they are more usefull too. Because Mekols son Alrik join's this unit knights will strike more deadly than normal knight's.

Reaper bolt throwers

2xReaper bolt throwers

These deadly war machine's are one of Mekol's favoured. They kill enemy knights and infantry as they would be nothing more than air. With these machine's Mekol has won many battles and many more he will win.[/u]

Tässä on vain alkua, kirjoittelen henkilöiden ja osastojen tarkempaa historiaa myöhemmin. Mutta sanokaapa rakkaat pelaaja toverini onko tuossa fluffissa mitää itua ja kannattaako sitä lähteä kehittelemään.

Kiitos

[Anki]

Vinkki: Kirjoita suomeksi jos et hallitse englannin kieltä.

Listasta näyttää puuttuvan magiapuolustus kokonaan.

[Finklestein]

Fluffy kulkee jotenkin tök-tök-tök mallin mukaan. Tuon mukaan ei kannata jatkaa eikä fluffyssa juuri "itua" löydy

[Earendur]

Ei hullumpaa, vaikka sieltä niitä kirjoitusvirheitä löytyykin. Jatka jos siltä tuntuu, ja ennen kaikkea jos pystyt parempaan

[The Captain]

Minusta tämä näyttää enemmän armeijalistalta kuin tarinalta.

[Harri]

Jäi sellainen fiilis tästä että sitä itse fluffia oli vain charruille, ja muille suotiin vain pätkä tekstiä jota ei voinut oikeastaan fluffiksi kutsua. Kirjoitusvirheet pistivät silmään. Mutta toki vaan kehittelemään tätä tavaraa,alkuahan siinä jo olikin.

[Mekol]

varmaa minä jatkelen. Mutta taidan jatkaa ihan suomeksi, ku ei tuo englanti minun pohjoispojanmaalaessee kiellee taevu kuten työ huommaatte.

Eli alampa kirjoittelemaan jo kauan haaveissa ollutta tarinaa