Ajattelin tässä kirjoittaa vähän juttua armeijastani, ja jostain syystä kirjoitin sen englanniksi. Syytä en tiedä, mutta varmaan asiaan liittyy se, että jutussa esiintyy örkkejä, enkä osaa kääntää örkkikieltä suomeksi. Oikoluin jutun melko nopeasti, joten jotain kirjoitusvirheitä saattaa löytyä.
"Da Plan". It was always about "Da Plan". Brokki shrugged and kicked the grunting greenskin. Brokki and his infamous Infiltratin' Lads had been shadowing Warlord Graza's Waaagh for seven months, and still they had no idea what Graza was up to. Graza was a huge Black Orc, with exeptional intelligence and cunning. For a year he had been gathering a massive Waaagh in the Badlands, but still had shown no intentions of launching an attack. This is highly supicious, because usully when an orc warlord gathers few thousand boyz he loses the control over them and the waaagh starts to pour in the general direction of more civilizided lands. These mere raids are usully stopped short, but Graza's mob was different. They stayed in order, and the usual squabbling and fighting among the orcs was gone. The size of the Waaagh wasn't still large enough to compete with the huge Waaaghs of Grom the Paunch, Azagh the Slaughterer and other notourious greenskin warlords of the past, but there was this other thing.
Apparently, Graza had convinced the mob to believe in some mysterious goal referred by the greenskins as "Da Plan". This bizarre behaviour had lighten the intrest of Barak Varr's rangers, and after some arquing it was decided that Brokki's Infiltratin' Lads was needed to solve the situation. The threat of nearing fleet of Dark Elf pirates was so high that Barak Varr just couldn't send troops to destroy the orc waaagh.
Brokki's Infiltratin' Lads were truly a strange mob of dwarwen mercenaries. Lead by the notorious Brokki "The Hammer", the Lads were famous for their abnatural abilities of shadowing and raiding other armies, on which they earned their name, The Infiltratin' Lads. They were particulary skilled in hunting orcs, and the bloodied and scarred hammer Brokki carried was usually referred by the orcs as "Da Smasha". They were simply the best mercenaries for this job.
Brokki muttered himself something about the lazy elflings of Barak Varr, and turned back to the greenskin. The black orc was large, and one of the Brokki's men was injured when capturing it. This was the sixth greenskin they had captured, and by far the most important. The other were mere goblins and smaller orcs, with no actual knowledge of "Da Plan". This one was different. Brokki could see the cunning light of intelligence on it's red eyes, and he know that the creature would know somthing. He lifted his hammer and looked at the greenskin.
"Right. Now ,you wretched scumbag, tell me all about this 'Plan' you bastards have, or I crush your knee. You undrestand?" he asked from the black orc.
"Me is tellin' 'nuthin", the orc said and spat at Brokki. "You stunties will fear da might uf da Boss an' his Plan!"
Brokki shrugged. "You leave me no other option than this", he said and swinged his hammer at the knee of the orc. The hammer smashed the knee with sickening crunch, and the leg of the orc twisted in unnatural angle. The Black Orc yelled a mighty growl, and then looked at Brokki with burning rage and stubborness in it's eyes.
"Me-is-tellin'-'nuthing!" it said between it's gritted teeth.
"This is going to take ages", Brokki sighed, and lifted his hammer once again.
Kuten edellissäkin tarinassa, tässä on vasta prologi. Jos pidätte, kirjoitan koko tarinan yhdessä rysäyksessä (enkä tipoittain kuten Fennerin tapauksessa). Voin myös jatkaa juttua suomeksi, jos olette sitä mieltä että englantini on alle yleisesti hyväksyttyjen normien.
Palautetta odottaen, JarLoz.
Brokki's Infiltratin' Lads
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Andromedus
- Viestit: 1968
- Liittynyt: Su 06.10.2002 19:57
- Paikkakunta: Savonlinna, Itäisten arojen linnake
Oli kyllä kivaa tekstiä tämäkin, englanniksikin oli kiva lukea välillä. Joitain pieniä kirjoitusvirheitä huomasin kyllä, mutta eivät ne tarinaa pahentaneet. Tämä oli taas tällainen vähän tavanomaisesta poikkeava, ja sellaiset saavat aina tuulta siipiensä alle heti alusta. Lisää vaan, kyllä tällaista luetaan. 
No voi kauhistus! Ei kai tämä kehkeydy suloisten ja kaikkien rakastamien vihreänahkojen tappamiseksi! 
Joo, hyvä prologi, vaikkakin englantia lukiessani minulta jää huomaamatta varmasti monta asiaa huono englanninkielen takia. Mutta yritetään, kun kerran JarLozilta saa kuulla juttua. Saas nähdä miten tässä tulee käymään.
MagnuM: Nytkö sinä olet jo täysverinen kääpiöpelaaja?
Joo, hyvä prologi, vaikkakin englantia lukiessani minulta jää huomaamatta varmasti monta asiaa huono englanninkielen takia. Mutta yritetään, kun kerran JarLozilta saa kuulla juttua. Saas nähdä miten tässä tulee käymään.
MagnuM: Nytkö sinä olet jo täysverinen kääpiöpelaaja?
Back in da biz and so deep in da bashin' game.
