Oman chapterin fluffia

[Hevi]

White Swords Chapter

Homeworld:
Andhes in the Segmentum Obscurus. Population: 50 000000

Organization:
As Codex Chapters, but the do prefer to use of a lot of Assault Squads, since they believe that honour and valor are only reachable when defeating your enemies in single hand-to-hand combat.

Origins:
When founded in the 7th Founding, a great Space Marine hero Lord Calendon was assigned to be the chapter`s Chapter Master . They were designated to protect the area and surroundings of their homeworld for any Chaos incursions to their territory.

Geneseed:
Their geneseed is from the Ultramarines Chapter.

History:
As founded to protect Andhes from chaos incursions, they were eager to fight the chaos threat, and on one of their crusades against the chaos forces in the area in the time of the 8th Black Crusade, their scouts encountered a force so vast, that it required almost the whole chapter to defeat it. When news of this vast force came to the knowledge of the Chapter Master Calendon, he ordered to leave only 2 companies to protect their homeworld and the rest 8 companies to attack the chaos worshippers. While the White Swords had left Andhes and waged war against the Chaos Force, another chaos group was passing by their homeworld to join Abaddons armies, they saw their chance to rid the galaxy of the White Swords chapter wich had maken their raids so much more difficult. Due to the absence of the 8 companies, the chaos worshippers attacked Andhes and almost utterly wiped out the defenders of the planet and left the capitol Kheritan to ruins. The 9th and 8th companies held their fortress monastery until help arrived, but they were unable to stop the chaos worshippers from killing almost a 9000000 men, civilians and imperial guard who tried to defend themselves. This event was known as the Kheritan massacre. When news of the attack reached the 1st-8th companies who had by now destroyed the chaos forces with small losses since they caught their enemies by surprise, Calendon ordered all of his forces to get back to Andhes and help the two companies desperately defending their homeworld. After weeks of fighting at Kheritan, Calendons troops finally defeated the Chaos forces. After this event, the White Swords changed their armour to black with red shoulder pads from their white armour in remembrance of the almost wiped out 9th and 8th companies.


Juu oli muuten minun eka tarina joten älkää ihmetelkö jos on jotain fluffillisia virheitä vaan korjatkaa.Saa kommentoida, kritiikkiä arvostetaan.

[Tybraal]

Kiva tarina, kiitos sen lähettämisestä. Lisäkdi voisit kuvailla enenmmän vaikka kotiplaneetaa, sankareita, perinteitä, tai vastaavaa. Lisäksi eikö koko heraldriikan muutaminen yhden verilöylyn takia ole hieman radikaalia (Dark Angeleillä sen ymmärsi). Ehkä muutat ainoastaan vaikkapa kypärän tai olkasuojat, pitäen valkoisen päävärinä?

[Hevi]

Heraldriikan muutto johtuu siitä, että:

musta= Häpesivät kun eivät hoitaneet annettua tehtävää vaan antoivat 9 miljoonan ihmisen kuolla vannottuaan suojelevansa heitä

punainen=kuvastaa omien kahdeksannen ja yhdeksännen komppanian kuolleiden jäsenten verta, ja sitä että he antoivat elämänsä suojellessaan kotiplaneettansa